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01/13/2024

Title: Evil Twin
By: Jaqueline Pilamunga

Alex and Tyler are twins.

Alex is nice.
But Tyler is evil.
I am playing with my blocks. I build a tower.
But my brother knocks it down.
I was so mad.
I am drawing a picture of my house.
But Tyler scribbles my picture with a black marker.
I was so mad.
I go outside to play in the sandbox.
But Tyler kick sand in my face.
I was so angry.
I play with my blue ball.
But Tyler throw the ball into the neighbors yard.
I was so mad.
I go inside to read my book.
But Tyler sn**ch it out of my hand and rip the pages.
I was so mad.
I go to the kitchen to have a snack.
But Tyler ate all my cookies. He does not like to share.
I was so mad.
I take a nap.
But Tyler blows the horn in my face.
I was so mad.
I watch Tv in the living room.
But Tyler turn the Tv off.
I was so mad.
I am going to take a bath.
But Tyler put a nast bug in the bathtub.
I was so mad.
My brother always picks on me for no reason. ” I wish he could be a lot nicer to me.”
My brother said, “I’m sorry I pick on you, I guess was jealous.”
Tyler is laughing at Alex.
“What’s so funny?” He asked Tyler.
“ I put a sign on your back.” He laughed. It says kick me.
So he kicked his brother.
“Wow, I didn’t see that coming”. He said

11/30/2023

Title: Christian and Stephanie are twins.

Christian is a boy.

Stephanie is a girl.

Christian has short black hair with blue eyes.

Stephanie has long black hair with blue eyes.

Christian wears boys' clothes.

Stephanie wears girls' clothes.

Christian wears hats.

Stephanie wears hair bows to match her outfit.

Christian room is blue.

Stephanie's room is pink.

Christian plays with trucks, cars, and blocks.

Stephanie likes to play with dolls, barbies, and play-dough.

Christian favorite sport is baseball.

Stephanie enjoys gymnastics.

Christian plays drums.

Stephanie sings and dances.

Christian collects action figures.

Stepanie collects bracelets.

Christian watches sports with Dad.

Stephanie enjoys baking with Mom.

Christian rides his skateboard.

Stephanie rides her scooter.

Christian likes to paint pictures.

Stephanie likes to paint her nails.

09/23/2023

Title: Tia Jaqui loves to visit her nieces

Here come Tia Jaqui!
We can’t for her.
I see her.
Tia Jaqui is here!
We go outside to play.
We run.
We race.
We play tag.
We go up and down the slides.
We go on the swings.
Then we play some bubbles.
Tia Jaqui blows the bubbles.
Lorelai and Elliana were trying to catch the bubbles.
Then we play soccer.
The soccer ball is black and white.
We kick the ball back and forth.
We kick the ball into the goalie net.
Sometimes we kick the ball too hard.
Lorelai kick the ball into the goalie net.
“Goal!” Tia Jaqui shouted.
“Wow, your good at soccer. Said Elliana
“Thanks” said Lorelai
Then we race to the fence and back.
Then we go inside and wash our hands.
We go downstairs to the playroom.
There a lot of toys down here.
We play a board game.
We play hop potato.
We put on some music.
We pass the ball to each other.
Then we play hide and seek.
Lorelai and Tia Jaqui we’re hiding behind the door, while Ellia was counting upstairs.
We play basketball.
We play catch.
We shoot the ball in the hoop.
Then we go upstairs to the living room table.
We do arts and crafts.
We made a pumpkin face for Halloween.
We color.
We even draw a picture.
We do playdough.
The playdough is very squishy and smooth.
Then Tia Jaqui said, “It’s circle time.”
We sit down on the carpet.
We go over our colors.
Shapes.
Numbers.
Then we sing our ABCS.
Sometimes we sing it too loud.
Then Tia Jaqui read us a story book called Pete the Cat.
Tia Jaqui said, “What kind of animal is he?”
Lorelai said, ”A Cat.”
“Yes, cat very good.” Said Jaqui
Next, we play freeze dance.
We dance and dance.
We hop.
We skip.
We tip-toe.
We wiggle.
We crawl.
Then Tia Jaqui gives her nieces a bath.
She put toys inside the bathtub.
She adds bubbles to turn into a bubble bath.
Then Tia Jaqui helps her nieces to put on their pajamas.
Tia Jaqui brings out the snacks.
We are having a sleepover.
We put on a movie.
We have popcorn, juice, and candy.
Then we cuddled on the couch to watched the movie.

09/12/2023

Timmy and Tommy are going to play with their electronics and video games all summer. The next day , Timmy and Tommy are going to play with their IPADS. Mom says, “Do you boys want to play outside? But they did not answer. Timmy and Tommy are playing with their Gameboy. Dad says, “Do you boys want to play catch outside?” But they did not answer. Then Timmy and Tommy are playing games on their computer. Mom said, “Do you boys want to go swimming? “No, thank you” said the boys. Then Timmy and Tommy were playing on their Xbox One. Dad said, “Do you boys want to go to the movies today? But they did not answer. Then Timmy and Tommy are playing on their Play station 4. Mom said, “Do you boys want to go to the zoo today? But they did not answer. Then Timmy and Tommy decided to play with their Nintendo Ds. Dad said, “Do you guys want to the water park today? But they would not answer. Then Timmy and Tommy are playing on their game cube. Mom said, “How about we go to the aquarium today? Timmy and Tommy would not pay any attention to their parents. All they want to do is play games, instead. Mom and Dad do not seem very about because all they wanted to do is play on their electronic device and video games. One day, Timmy and Tommy are playing with their leapfrog game. Dad says, “Boys do you want to go to the amusement park today?” Timmy and Tommy pause their games. “What did you say? Tommy asked. “Did you say the amusement park? Timmy said. Dad said, “Why yes, I did. He laughed. The boys were looking at each other with the big smile on their face. They seem very excited because Timmy and Tommy loves to go on roller coasters. “Yes, can we go, please. They begged. Mom and Dad are both smiling and laughing at them because they knew they were going to say yes. Mom and dad said, “Yes, let’s have some fun. They smile. “Yay, I can’t wait said the boys. “It’s going to be so much fun.” Said Timmy. Mom and Dad knew they were going to say yes.

08/30/2023

Title: Lottery Ticket

Mommy, Daddy, and I are driving to the grocery store. We buy milk, eggs, bread, yogurt, and cheese. Then Mommy and Daddy are going to buy a lottery ticket. "I want a lottery ticket too," I said. But Mom says, "I'm sorry but you are not old enough to buy your own lottery ticket."
"No, fair! He shouted.
We got home.
I help my mom and dad to put away the groceries.
Then we go to the living room to sit down.
I turn the TV on.
We wait and see.
"I am so depressed because I want my own lottery ticket." He said
"If I ever win a lottery ticket, I will buy a lot of things. I said.
I would buy a mansion.
A swimming pool.
A Hot tub.
A pool table.
I would buy an air hockey table.
A soda machine.
Or a Bubble gum machine.
I will buy lots of toys.
I would get my own personal chef.
I would even hire housekeeping that cleans for me.
I would buy an indoor basketball court.
I would buy lots of clothes, shoes, and accessories.
I will buy three plasm screens Tv's.
And Five Xbox One.
I would be the luckiest kid on Earth.
"Okay, here we go now. "
"Hey, we're about to listen to see who's going to be the luckiest number."
"The luckiest numbers are. 9, 24, 32, 44... and 55.
"We did not win the lottery," I said.

08/27/2023

Title: Twins

Jacob and Tyler are twins.
They both wear the same clothes, eye color, and hair color.
Jacob is older than Tyler by one minute and twenty seconds.
Anyways some twins have different interests, likes, and tastes.
Jacob's favorite sport is basketball.
But Tyler's favorite sport is soccer.
Jacob and Tyler share the same room.
Jacob and Tyler have bunk beds.
Tyler sleeps on the top bunk.
But Jacob sleeps on the bottom bunk.
Tyler favorite color is blue.
Jacob favorite color is red.
Tyler put on his blue pajamas.
While Jacob put on his red pajamas.
"I have a red toothbrush." said, Jacob.
"You have a blue toothbrush." He said.
I have dinosaurs on my wall." said, Jacob.
Tyler has trucks on his side of the wall.
Tyler wants to become a firefighter when he grows up.
Jacob wants to become a police officer when he grows up.
Jacob plays drums.
But Tyler plays the guitar.
Jacob and Tyler decided to go on a bike ride.
Jacob is riding his blue bike.
While Tyler is riding his red bike.
Jacob and Tyler are riding their bikes to the park.
As soon as they got inside the garage, they parked their bikes.
Then Jacob and Tyler were going to the ice cream store with their parents.
When they walk into the ice cream store, Jacob gets the chocolate ice cream and Tyler gets the vanilla ice cream.
Jacob was drawing a picture.
While Tyler reads his book.
Then Mom and Dad are taking Jacob and Tyler to the Halloween store to get costumes.
Jacob wants to be Mario for Halloween and Tyler decides to be Luigi for Halloween.
On Hallween night, Jacob and Tyler were going to trick or treat with their parents.
Jacob and Tyler have lots of fun.
Their bags are so full.
Jacob and Tyler dump their candy on the floor.
Tyler prefers chocolate.
But Jacob on the other hand, loves gummies.

06/09/2023

Hey Everyone,

It’s been awhile since I post any stories on Facebook. I am writing a children story. Let me know if this makes any sense to you so I can get my book published. Thank you.

Title: Twins
Author: Jaqueline Pilamunga

Melissa and Veronica are twins. They have the same birthdays. Melissa is older than Veronica by one minute. They look alike but they are different. Melissa is very girly. But Veronica is a tomboy. Melissa wears hair bows to match with her dresses. Veronica prefers to wear hats. Melissa wears mini-skirts, dresses, sandals, flats, and panty hose. Veronica on the other hand, wears t-shirts, shorts, pants, hoodies, and gym shoes. Melissa and Veronica has different hobbies and interest. Melissa enjoys baking, knitting, tea parties, beauty, and making jewelry. Veronica favorite hobbies are video games, sports, skateboarding, and reading comics. Melissa wants to become a fashion designer when she grows up. Veronica wants to become a video game designer or a basketball when she grows up. One day, they all decided to go to the mall. Dad and Veronica are going to the book store to look for comic books. While Mom and Melissa are at the nail salon to get their manicure. The. Veronica aand Dad are at the game stop to buy new video games. Mom and Melissa are going shopping to buy new clothes. Veronica enjoys reading her new favorite comic books. Melissa loves her new outfit. Next day, Dad is taking Veronica to the basketball game. while Mom and Melissa has cooking club to go to. Melissa and Veronica are twins. But they both have different hobbies and interest. Melissa is very girly. Veronica is a tomboy. No matter how different they are, Melissa and Veronica always gonna be sisters. But they will always love each other no matter what.

04/04/2023

One day, a 14 year old boy named Eli was taking a walk to the park. As soon as he got to the park, Eli see this beautiful girl sitting down on the bench by herself. He was feeling nervous to go talk to her. So, Eli started walking slowly. When he came up to her, Eli introduces himself. Her name is Olivia. Then the two started talking. They have a lot of things in common. Eli and Olivia kept talking for hours. After they were done talking, they decided to share their first kiss. Then five minutes later, Olivia’s mom got of her car so she can pick up her daughter from the park. Olivia’s mom started to wonder where she is. Finally, she sees her daughter kissing a boy on the bench. She was not very happy about it. When the mom came up to her, she started yelling at her because she does not want her daughter to be kissing boys. Olivia was feeling embarrassed and humiliated. Her face started to turn red. Then Olivia and her mom are walking to the car. They both waited goodbye to each other. Olivia and Eli are depressed because they really like each other. Eli will always remember her name and never forget that was his first kiss. Then Ten years later, Eli happens to see Olivia at the park. “Olivia is that you.” Said, Eli, holding his iPhone. “Yes, it's me Olivia, Oh My Goodness, how are you doing? She smiled. They both gave each other a hug. I can’t believe it's you. She chuckled. “Yeah, I know its been way too long, I am doing good. “How are you doing?” He asked her. I’m doing pretty good myself, “I’m a interior designer. “How about,” What you been up too.” Olivia asked Eli. “Wow, that’s fantastic.” Also, I’m a video game designer, and trying to become a comic book artist too.” He said. “Wow, good for you.” She smiled. “Wow, I remember we shared our first kiss together and your mom got pretty mad at you”. “Yeah, I remember, she was not happy about it. She said. “Hey, uh listen, are you single, Eli Mumbled, rubbing his head. “Yes, I am still single, are you trying to ask me out on a date or something. She said. “Why yes, is that okay with you. He said, as sounded nervous. “Can I have your phone number so I can call you?” “Yes, you may. She said. Olivia and Eli exchange phone numbers. “Thank you and I will call you later, it was great seeing you.” Eli waved goodbye to her. “Okay, and it was nice seeing you too. They both smiled at each other. As time goes on, Olivia and Eli were having a great time together. Until then, a few years later, Eli and Olivia decided to get married. Then Olivia and Eli are going to have their first child. They are so excited and cannot wait to meet their baby girl. Olivia and Eli are going to name her Stephanie.

03/30/2023

One day, Damien and his friends are studying for their geometry test. They do not like geometry because it is too hard. So, the boys had an idea. They are about to make the biggest mistake of their lives. They are going to sneak into the classroom to take pictures of the test. As soon as they got into the classroom, the boys are searching for the answer key. Damien found the answer key in Mr.Lopez desk drawer. The boys are taking their phones out of their pockets so they can take pictures of the test. Next morning, Damien and his friends are about to take their test. The boys are taking their phones so they can cheat. Mr. Lopez was on his computer while everyone is taking their test. The boys are copying of the test from the answer key from their phones. After the test was over, Damien and his friends handed the test to their teacher. Then the principal, walked into their classroom. The principal was whispering to the teacher that the boys were in your classroom last night and seemed to appear they have found the answer key in your desk drawer. “I have them on camera.” He said. The teacher could not believe this. He was so shocked they had cheated. The boys are so embarrassed, humiliated, and their faces are started to turn red. Damien and his friends are going to get kick of their basketball team. However, the boys are going to be detention for a month. So, the principal are going to take the boys to his office so they can call their parents about they have done.

01/20/2023

Title: Walter Story

There once was a old grumpy man named Walter. He is 96 years old and does not like anyone. Walter gets very angry if somebody ever tries to bother him. Every day, Walter reads his newspaper on the living room couch. One day, Tony and his friends are walking around the neighborhood. They noticed their on Walter block, the meanest man in the world. The boys are going to make the biggest mistake they will ever make. ”Hey Tony, I dare you to knock on Walter door. Brandon said, pointing to the door. “Come on are you serious?” He asked him. Tony doesn’t know what to do because he is afraid to knock on his door. He is just standing their looking at the door and his friends. His face starts to turn red.
“Yes, go knock on his door. “Mikey said. “I don’t know you guys.” Tony looks down at his shoes, shaking his body. “Come on Tony, are you chicken or what.” Chris chuckle making chicken noises. Everyone is laughing at Tony. He doesn’t want to get in any kind of trouble. This was Brandon idea. ”Alright fine I will do it! Just stop making those chicken sounds at me.” It so annoying.” Tony yells at his friends. His friends could not believe he is going to knock on his door. Tony is walking to his door slowly. When he got to his door, Tony turned around and looking at his friends. They are laughing and giggling at him. “Okay it here goes.” He told himself. Then Tony begin to knock on his door. His face is turning red. Until then, Walter heard noises. ”Hey who is knocking on my door”! He shouted, putting down his newspaper.
“Uh oh”. Tony ran downstairs and said, “Come on you guys run, he’s coming!” he shouted.
“Man I can not believe this!” The boys shouted. Then Walter is walking to the front door and starts to open it. “You rotten kids don’t you ever come knocking on my door!!” Walter yelled, slams the door shut. After he slammed the door, Walter decided he is going to take a nap on the living room couch. Two days later, Walter died in his sleep because he was not moving or breathing.

01/16/2023

Title: Lucky Stone

A 13-year-old boy named Brandon is walking home from school. He is so depressed because he did not do so well on his math test. As he was walking home from school, Brandon stopped and noticed something on the ground. It is so shiny and small, that flashed his eyes. Then Brandon picked it up and put in his pocket. He found a blue stone. When he got home from school, Brandon ran upstairs' and went straight to his room. Then Brandon pulls out the stone out of his pocket. "Hmm, "I wonder if this would be a good lucky stone. rubbing his head. Brandon has to study for his math because he has to retake it again tomorrow. Then Brandon takes out his math book so he can study for his math test. Next Morning, Brandon wakes up and starts to get ready for school. After he is done getting, Brandon came downstairs and heads out the door. As soon as he got to his classroom, Brandon starts to sit down so he could take his test. He is excited and nervous at the same time. Brandon is trying so hard to solve the equations. An hour and half later, Brandon finish his test. Then the teacher got up and collect his test. "You can go know. said the teacher." Thank you, Mr. Rodriguez."

Then the next day, Brandon teacher gave him the test. “Congratulations Brandon you pass your math test.” He is so happy because he got an A on his test. Brandon takes out his stone and said, "I guess this stone would be good luck charm, he smiles.

01/07/2023

Title: Tony’s Life Story

Tony is 12 years old and lives with his parents and his younger brother named Christian. They lived in a small blue house in California, Los Angeles.

He wants to become a comic book artists and a basketball player when he grows up.

On Monday, Tony goes to the library to do his homework.

On Tuesday, Tony and his friends goes to the park to play basketball.

On Wednesday, Tony draws in his sketchbook.

On Thursday, Tony reads his comic books.

On Friday, Tony and his family goes out to dinner.

On Saturday, Tony and his friends likes to have a sleepover. They like to watch movies, play video games, make popcorn, and have pillow fights.

On Sunday, Tony and his younger brother Christian goes outside to play catch.

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